All Comments on 'A Letter from Old India Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
what a erotic story

What a beautiful story ! This is someone from India, and things are definitely changed now. We are morally uptight, don't freely embrace the sex sutra or freedom which is granted to us. Your story felt so real, it was as if I was beside those two women and inhaling their sensous body odour. Thank you

JustaSCOUNDRELJustaSCOUNDRELabout 12 years ago
Another Winner

Another winner from Battleax Babe. I really enjoyed Pt. 1 and was glad to see this Pt. 2 posted. I really like the way the author writes. I thought she had left a a couple of small things hanging in the original and she did a great job of tying them up in a very sexy way. Thank you.

I wonder if there may be another story to come.

Mike

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Heh

Unfortunately this same letter written in modern tongue would probably read as follows; "Today I fucked a brown girl on the beach. It was awesome. Love you. - Maggie"

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