All Comments on 'Unlimited Passion'

I especially liked the bit about her picking up on his nervousness without him saying so - a brilliant touch.

for the quality of the writing: precise details, easy reading and clarity of presentation.

This has to be the best story that I have read yet. I love the descriptions, and the sensual nature. I can't wait to read more. THANK YOU!!!!

This is not criticism, I have just never heard a door as having a "knowing click",

Could you define that please ?

Hot and sweet, a really fine story. But of course a great story needs quibbling, and my quibbles follow via "Send Feedback". Fine work!

Slow and sensual. So much described and do much left to the imagination. A nice piece of work!

You conveyed the feelings, the desires very well... enjoyed it.

Outstanding - erotic - amazing! Very well done!

What a wonderful story Red...so erotically detailed one can just sit back and see this unfolding. xx

Excellent story Red.....love the detail, the setting, the anticipation, the realization....