All Comments on 'Sex On The Train'

Stupid.Skin clour do not rub off.

I think that says it all. Yuk

It is not shocking that the terrorist likes to bomb British Raiways.Its to get rid of slut,cuckold husbands and wimps.Like in the US the Blacks always do the dirty deed

A female writer that loves cuckolding her husband and who claims that the husband loves it too. Of course he does, all cucks love being humiliated and they love to know how other men fuck their wives far better than they ever could it's what wimp cucks get off on. You and your husband deserve each other.

I don't think she meant black as in the spunks color but black man's spunk. Other wise it was poorly written and totally unbelievable. LIke anyone today would pick up with three guys in a situation that could get her killed. Ok I guess I'll go back to my novel as I am a quality reader. RIGHT> that is why i am here

Sweet Judy, especially welcome to Loving Wives ( the toughest ratings and rudest commenters among all the categories). Thank you for your first submission (pun intended!) That said, I would first suggest a little early alert that you(r character) are/is not exactly a virgin or an only-with-hubby wife. (Didn't even know the character was female until into paragraph two.). As it was, the easy 'seduction' seemed highly unlikely instead of simply unlikely. Typos, omitted words and grammar are easy to fix...avail yourself of the volunteer editors on this site. Again, thanks for sharing, and don't let the trolls scare you away.

This should have been in Interracial!!! There is no loving wife here. the bitch is a slut not to mention risking her own life. She had no Idea that all the (Censored) wanted was to fuck. The writer is encouraging the low life of society to continue in their lawless and terroristic ways without any reprecussions. I found this story to be moralistically repulesive.

this story qwas awesome . reading this was like watch as the three black cocks got to fuck and fill you hole with lots of spunk . brilliant story love it. all i can say is more please more of this kind of story sex on the train

Yes, she should feed his fantasy (given that he said it without prompting). Anyway, this may forestall a potential problem in nine months' time.

More, please.

A delightful story, well told!

The stupid trolls who just wank themselves silly and shoot their watery spunk all over their keyboards and then criticise the author make me fucking sick.

This was a new author writing her first story for Literotica and almost certainly sharing one of her fantasies with us all which I consider a to be a privilege. Even sharing it with you bunch of ungrateful moronic wap-heads who couldn't write three words together to save your lives.

Fantasy you dickheads, no more than a fucking fantasy and well written too. As for the grammar who gives a shit for fuck's sake wake up and smell the spunk (black or white).

I wonder how many of you moralistic screwballs let your wives know you are here reading these stories and what is more if you met Judy on a train or anyway else and she gave you the nod how many of you would be stopped by her wedding ring? That is if you didn't premature ejaculate before you got near her. Truth be known you had probably ejaculated before she even got on the train

As for the bombing of the London tube, how much cuckolding was going on in the fucking twin towers when they came crashing down. Judy you are a breath of fresh air keep writing.

By the way have you noticed that the gutless trolls never have the courage to be anything but anonymous?

Must have gotten his balls sucked into the vacuum cleaner again. To even call this mess a story is criminal. Author got some of that nasty black spunk in computer keyboard.

A little proofreading recommanded.

Otherwise a real hot story of raw animalistic sex.

Liked it. 5*

Terrible. A lot of stories here are so unrealistic, have not been proofread and are just rubbish. Stop writing these dreadful stories and maybe spend more than 5 minutes on them

SirDuction, stop simping lmao