"dragging her figure across her chin"
Hey, thanks for noting my error. I'm not sure I can fix it without having to take down the whole story and resubmit so if that's the only one, I guess we are all stuck with it. If there are several more errors, however, I'd certainly want to fix the whole thing up. In any case, I hope it did not detract from your reading experience too much. I'd love to know if you had any substantial critcisms of the piece.
I think your story was great !! You certainly must write another chapter or 2 and let Gina finish what she started with Dr. Clarke. Its a nice HOT start - thank you !
If only ALL the stories were as well written as this one. Good phantasy, good writing, especially compared to the run of pretty bad writing recently. It is pretty obvious that you didn't sleep through ALL of your English classes! Anonymous has to lighten up and go after the REALLY bad ones. Cheers!
Amazing. 5 stars. I would write more but I need a cold drink and a shower. LOVED it.
A fantastic piece of highly charged eroticism. Your a master at this genre, keep it up please, please, please.
P.s to anon with all the derogatory homophobic BS, try a type of story you like. Perhaps to be found the under 12 years of age section.
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