All Comments on 'The Warrior's Heart Ch. 01'

by LucyKing101

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DoctorWolfDoctorWolfabout 12 years ago
When's more?

That was a really fun read and it moved at a nice pace. I'm interested to see what the crushers really are and what your heros will do with them! Please write more DW

catman71catman71about 12 years ago
good start

i can see several ways this could go, all seem interesting, hope to see more soon

donaldedonaldeabout 12 years ago
excellent start

has the makings to be a great tale i am looking forward to reading more

huntersangelhuntersangelabout 12 years ago
nice!

i really liked how you wrote this first chapter, it completely pulled me in and kept me. i hope you keep it up because this was very good so far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
like this

Like how this started, and looking forward to reading more :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I agree

Great beginning. Good character study. Look forward to more. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Beautiful

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thank you .

Jack2303Jack2303about 12 years ago
Great Start!

I couldn't do anything but become invested in these two characters...I so have to read this whole story tonight. smh. I'm going to be a little sleepy at work, but I'm sure I'll love it. LOL

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