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The Warrior's Heart Ch. 01

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by DoctorWolf03/01/12

When's more?

That was a really fun read and it moved at a nice pace. I'm interested to see what the crushers really are and what your heros will do with them! Please write more DW

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by catman7103/01/12

good start

i can see several ways this could go, all seem interesting, hope to see more soon

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by donalde03/01/12

excellent start

has the makings to be a great tale i am looking forward to reading more

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by huntersangel03/02/12

nice!

i really liked how you wrote this first chapter, it completely pulled me in and kept me. i hope you keep it up because this was very good so far.

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by Anonymous03/02/12

like this

Like how this started, and looking forward to reading more :)

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by Anonymous03/03/12

I agree

Great beginning. Good character study. Look forward to more. Thanks

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by Anonymous03/04/12

Beautiful

Can't wait for the next chapter.
Thank you .

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by Jack230303/12/12

Great Start!

I couldn't do anything but become invested in these two characters...I so have to read this whole story tonight. smh. I'm going to be a little sleepy at work, but I'm sure I'll love it. LOL

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