All Comments on 'Whore for a Day'

very horny. kiss my ass is still your best.

Just found this by accident. great story line. loved it;

Awesome story, when is the next chapter coming?

What a way to get caught. Serves the whore right. Yes, the husband is paranoid. I guess we now know it is for good reason based on her decision making skills.

Iwould have to say I see a divorce in the works. I would especially after he tells him it was his wife he had as a hooker. SORRY, BEING IN AN ARGUEMENT DOES NOT MEAN YOU HAVE TO BE WHORE. LOOKS LIKE HUSBAND WAS RIGHT. NOW GET RID OF THE WHORE-LET HER WALK THE STREETS.

She should just leave now. How can she possibly meet his friend knowing she whored herself to him the night before. Fucking cunt.

I loved the story, so naughty at work and then plain nasty and used that same night. Call her (or me) a whore or slut or hooker, the fact we enjoy sex and being used makes us none of these any more than a man. I loved that HIS friend was her "first" John (oh that is right his name was Darren), and the meeting tomorrow night will be fun filled. Darren if he is a gentleman will remain quiet, tease her, keep her wet and aroused and she will meet him later again, to be used over and over. HOW LONG was Darren going to be in town???????? Loved it all and I would take her place anytime.

Go for it Vicki

I didn't care much for the story, but partially because of one line:

"So what's your name?" Jon asked as she sat down and closed the door.

I was thinking that her husband picked her up and they had a sex game until the end of the story when she went home TO her husband. I probably would have liked it better that way.

Loved the tale and the twist, hope to read more about her.

Seriously??? Wow... That is the wife of my worst nightmares!

Well done. Detractors are missing the point.

But she's busted big time. I know my wife fucks around with my blessing but not with anyone o know. Ouch.

One is to persuade her husband it will excite him to share her with his friend Darren, maybe even bet him she can seduce Darren despite their friendship -- all he has to do is arrive a couple of hours later than she will. Another is to be told suddenly that her mother is desperately ill and needs her, so hubby and Darren will have to do without her. A third is to buy hubby a temptress with her $1500, to seduce him the next day, so she can claim hers was a revenge fuck that anticipated his infidelity (hey, maybe he'd buy that!). A fourth -- get to Darren in advance and warn him that if she goes down, so will he because she'll tell his wife back home. Let's see, another is ....

the author first called the guy in the car "Jon?" If so, it was an obvious error. I wish the story continued, but only if she gets caught. The tags are completely worthless.

Funny and good read...

NEEDS CHAPTER 2!!!!!!!!

The TWAT goes out and cheats after her husband indicates he wouldn't want her fucking someone else? Let's hope Darren really is an old friend and rats out the worthless slut!

It seems our little Miss, or is it Mrs. Victoria, has problem. I don't know if you wrote a sequel, but it would be fun to see and hear what might happen.

Jedd Clampett

Immediately if not sooner.

T th e divorce will be swift, sure and deadly!

Not finished.

Unrealistic as hell but could use a sequel.

It will be great when she gets found out.

Hope she dies very slowly due to HIV and he is free of that slut without problems!!

I have to look for a sequel. Personally I would love to have a wife who fucks like a whore. She needs to introduce that into their foreplay. If Darren is smart he will compliment his buddy for having such an attractive wife.

They may live in this world, but have no appreciation of fantasy.

Good descriptions of good fucking, with a cute twist at the end. Would have liked to have read your telling of how she resolved this dilemma. I think that Darren would have kept their secret, but made a "rematch," which Victoria would have kept, at first reluctantly, but then wholeheartedly.

I'm always amused at these twits who act like these fantasies are realistic, and criticize everything. It's a story, and just allow yourself to get turned on!

Is she pregnant? How many diseases does she have? And will she enjoy her divorce? Because any man, even a deaf, dumb and blind man would take one look and one smell of her as she comes thru the door and KNOW for certain that she's just been fucked. This is another completely unfinished story by this author that seems to have the "I can't finish a story" disease. Ugly garbage.

1 star

Happenned to me, fucked this hot piece of ass when visiting a really good mate. God sh was tight, got to say when I got to jis house I was so fucking surprised I could hardly speak. Over dinner my mate saw something was out of wack and asked what the problem was. I looked straight at his wife and said you or me, she bilted for their room and I pulled my pnoe out and showed him a photo of his wife sucking my nine inch cock.. I stayed and in his spare room and she was kicked to the curb. That was fucked up.

I hope the friend goes bros before hoes and burns her skank ass.

5*

I reckon the reunion will flow relatively smoothly. The initial 10-second look of shock will be covered by " Have we met before. ? " " You remind me of someone . " " It WILL come to me. "

Later, when alone, excuses are given and explained and ,,,,, chapter two.

AND to the critics of this story, it is just that, a story. I enjoyed it, a bit over the top but OK.

If Darren is his best friend, he will tell Jon exactly what happened. Bros before hoes, right? It would serve her right. Keep up the good work. MtM