by rowdygal22
This story is just ridiculously brilliant! You absolutely have to write more, but make it longer this time :)) Cheers!
Great writing!! Looking forward to more soon. Like in a couple of months please. ChristieP
I usually never read these chapter stories because I'm too impatient but this one has got me hooked! Please write more!!!!!
' that awesome i was so happy to see a chapter 2 but where is a chapter 3 ?
Regards Eliza .xx
Oookay, you are now OFFICIALLY my fave author on here from the top of my head, and it's all because of the two characters that you've swirled up and seemingly breathed life into them!!! XD XD XD The three chapters you've posted in all are driving me CRAZY, and yes, you, RowdyGirl, is topping the rowdiness in teasing people, because WE. WANT. MORE. Please. *whimpers, kneading at the ground in a comical bow* Anyways, other than that-- you have the words to light up peoples' days, and your stories are very intense and real. Thank you so much for posting.
Ohhh I Could Kiss You, Or Be Really Upset With You.
You Brought Laura & Sara Loving Together. Then
You Throw In Rachel To Bring Confusion & Thoughts
Of Mistrust.
Too Not Only The Two Lover's But, Also In My Mind
Which Means Three Confused Minds And Sad Hearts.
It's All Up To Your Sweet 'n Magical Love Writting
To Help Laura, Sara, And Myself. PLEASE !
When is the next chapter going to be posted? Hurry back.
please post the next chapter. ..i truly can't wait...i love your work...
Still need more, great writing, you seem to know something about taking a woman to the brink then leave them hanging. I want more
Ah well. The two chapters were sweet and hot.
Please write more, I hope Sara realizes that women can do it better, maybe I'm a lil prejudiced cause I'm a lesbian, but most of us do know how to do it beautifully and sensually the way it should be. If it doesn't work out with Sara and laura though it sounds like Rachel is definitely feeling laura so there's that angle but it would be a lil better if Sara and laura stayed together. Laura would be so good to her in every way especially lovemaking. I hope u write more but thanks for this story. Great job!
There is so much more to tell. Please don't let it end here. Your writing style is terrific and has pulled me in completely. Thank you so much and I hope, one day, to see chapter three.
A lot left out. These stories are extremely short and long on exposition rather than action. Or rather , they get to the sex without much preamble or anticipation. Dialogue is very good.
Would someone please finish a good lesbian romance? Rather than leaving us hanging? And then disappearing?