All Comments on 'It's Always Been You Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great Story

Please continue. Soon! Great start but longer too please!

ihatejanestreetihatejanestreetalmost 12 years ago
More

This story is just ridiculously brilliant! You absolutely have to write more, but make it longer this time :)) Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
please write soon!

i like this a lot ! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
MORE!!!!

Please write more, I love this story so far.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Continue?????

Please continue!!!! This story can't end here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

brilliant more please longer if possible

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
WOW

Great writing!! Looking forward to more soon. Like in a couple of months please. ChristieP

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great so far!

I usually never read these chapter stories because I'm too impatient but this one has got me hooked! Please write more!!!!!

Qui3t0n3Qui3t0n3almost 12 years ago
Gettn good

4real u gots 2keep going ...keep doin ya thing

elle_9549elle_9549almost 12 years ago

Absolutely lovely. Please keep going with this! ~ L

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
More

That was great! Write the next chapter already

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
' Ook seriously you have to keep writing !

' that awesome i was so happy to see a chapter 2 but where is a chapter 3 ?

Regards Eliza .xx

KirotoKirotoover 11 years ago
Sweet, Delicious Torture

Oookay, you are now OFFICIALLY my fave author on here from the top of my head, and it's all because of the two characters that you've swirled up and seemingly breathed life into them!!! XD XD XD The three chapters you've posted in all are driving me CRAZY, and yes, you, RowdyGirl, is topping the rowdiness in teasing people, because WE. WANT. MORE. Please. *whimpers, kneading at the ground in a comical bow* Anyways, other than that-- you have the words to light up peoples' days, and your stories are very intense and real. Thank you so much for posting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Next Chapter

More, more more! Please post the next chapter already!

KathyFKathyFover 11 years ago
Ohhh I'm In Such Suspense

Ohhh I Could Kiss You, Or Be Really Upset With You.

You Brought Laura & Sara Loving Together. Then

You Throw In Rachel To Bring Confusion & Thoughts

Of Mistrust.

Too Not Only The Two Lover's But, Also In My Mind

Which Means Three Confused Minds And Sad Hearts.

It's All Up To Your Sweet 'n Magical Love Writting

To Help Laura, Sara, And Myself. PLEASE !

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
when??

When do we get the next chapter?????

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
It's been 6 months

When is the next chapter going to be posted? Hurry back.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
i can't wait any longer

please post the next chapter. ..i truly can't wait...i love your work...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
like this one too

8~) DKP

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

More!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Mmm

Still need more, great writing, you seem to know something about taking a woman to the brink then leave them hanging. I want more

FiveWolvesFiveWolvesabout 9 years ago
Destined to be an unfinished story, I guess

Ah well. The two chapters were sweet and hot.

Veronica20Veronica20about 9 years ago

Please write some more!!!!!!!

luvandluckluvandluckover 8 years ago
please write a continuation

Please write more, I hope Sara realizes that women can do it better, maybe I'm a lil prejudiced cause I'm a lesbian, but most of us do know how to do it beautifully and sensually the way it should be. If it doesn't work out with Sara and laura though it sounds like Rachel is definitely feeling laura so there's that angle but it would be a lil better if Sara and laura stayed together. Laura would be so good to her in every way especially lovemaking. I hope u write more but thanks for this story. Great job!

gjames17gjames17about 8 years ago
Please write more

There is so much more to tell. Please don't let it end here. Your writing style is terrific and has pulled me in completely. Thank you so much and I hope, one day, to see chapter three.

pseud277pseud277almost 3 years ago

A lot left out. These stories are extremely short and long on exposition rather than action. Or rather , they get to the sex without much preamble or anticipation. Dialogue is very good.

okami1061okami1061over 1 year ago

Would someone please finish a good lesbian romance? Rather than leaving us hanging? And then disappearing?

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