All Comments on 'Concert in the Park'

such a cute story it is . .naughty n nice couple . .wanna have a life just like you :-)

lovely story, enjoyed reading it ...please write more about your sexual adventures

I feel like this is a really good story that just lacks the physical and emotional explicit descriptiveness to make it great. Don't get me wrong, if that's how you like to write then I in no way wish to discourage you, but I prefer to hear everything the protagonist is experiencing.

Loved this. Very erotic and tasteful. I woyld love ti make love outside that that.