All Comments on 'Experience Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Nice Start

You’re off to a great start; I look forward to that first liaison with Rita.

bruce1971bruce1971about 12 years ago
Nice

Unique characters, a slow build, this is very promising!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Good Start

A good start and I'm looking forward to the rest

GrimsbainGrimsbainabout 12 years ago
Liked it so far...

I like this story so far even with no action in the first part. Looking forward to the next part.

cricketxcricketxover 10 years ago
No sex but very very good

No sex but very very good. Exceptional dialog and moved at a very fine pace.

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