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The words, inside, deep, swallow, taste, need etc. give it an erotic tinge, but the need seems much more emotional than physical. Well done.

You show an intimate use of off rhyme, which is a talent in itself and the content is strong and mind blowing. Loved this poem! Good work!!

~ maria

or fake it till u make it. TK U MLJ LV NV

"I want to taste your soul" is a powerful hook.