All Comments on 'A Message from Mr Smith and Mr Wess'

This is a typical rollicking romantic detective story. If you like that sort of thing!

Thank you, Cromagnonman!

I like that sort of thing!!

...a bit cheesy, but I loved every word of it!

Write on!

Fuck all the people who didn't like the story. I think it fuckin rocked ,more please.

film noir P.I. story. Good stuff, Cro.

but a blind pig can find an a-kernal- of clues. TK U MLJ LV NV

I like these stories they are so entertaining. Thanks for sharing.

I could almost see the flickering cinema images, hear the soulful wail of a lonely sax, reading this story. I thought it was a bit complicated for being so short (another 3000 words might have helped), but it was fun.

Thank you

HP

Or, since I am reading alphabetically, maybe it already started heh

A fun story - I was a full step behind on the answer though - as soon as he gave Laura her instructions I knew but no t until then.

Of course, like Agatha Christie, he never shared what he saw in the picture until the full reveal -

Nice job thank you

5 stars, however ended to fast

dime crime stories. A new one every week. This could easily have been on the shelf in the news stand.

but they would cost a lot more than a dime, even for the e version.

and then to be cut down by a taxi. TK U MLJ LV NV

A pretty good "film noir" style story. 5*

funnier than Mike Hammond