All Comments on 'Mo's Visit to America'

use a spell checker

Lost me in 10th paragraph, when you went from first to third person then back again.

I guess my lack of proper grammar and spelling come in handy at times,, since I just read the story and dont look for or catch mistakes enough to ruin it for me. I could see it all ion my minds eye playing out like a movie and loved it as well as thinking it was hot,

I also wont leave a comment anonymously