All Comments on 'The Drive'

by TheChameleon

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
SHOULD EXPAND THE ENERGY

into a meeting of kind. TK U MLJ LV NV

Maria2394Maria2394about 12 years ago
as far as a rhyme poem goes

this one is pretty good! Only thing that threw me off was the absence of a rhyme at the end when you had been so consistent throughout the entire poem. Good work :)

~ maria

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