by cuckoldtony
Just plain bad story. No rhyme or reason for the slut wife, why the father let the attack go, how the fat wife knew about the sheriff and doctor and why the hell a PI would get caught AGAIN. This whole story just doesn't make any sense and is a waste of time to read, especially considering that the author neglected to finish it.
This should also be under 'voyeur son' category.
The story is erotic.
I did not like the abuse of the young girl though. You should have written two separate stories. There are not many good stories where son gets to watch his mother enjoying sex with a man other than his father. The idea that his dad was a voyeur and a cuck himself is brilliant and unique.
Voyeur/cuckold story should be there by itself.
The most erotic moment is when the chief fucks the mother, her face showing she enjoys it and her boobs fully exposed.
I am a mature man now but i remember i liked to watch my mom. i was a voyeur then & i am now.
Your comment are short, not always 'sweet and short,' and are followed by a number of letters. They must stand for something. I am just puzzled.
My mothet was blond, 5'10" with hour glass figure. She was shapely in all right places. My parents had a cottage. That's were we spent weekends when the weather was nice. My parents had a lot of vistors, all wete couples with one exception. One man was divorsed. I understood he had been my mom's boss a while back.
i hated ehen he was there (well yes and no): he touched my mother whenever he got a chance even when my dad was present. He would apply the sun screen lotion all over her body (she wore bikinis!) He would kill moskitoes that landed on her thighs. My mom & my dad let him do whatever he wanted. Something was fishy.
I must admit i enjoyed watching how he interacted with my mom but that drove me angry as well. One evening i was supposedly sleeping in the little dan beside the kitchen. The door was open. My mom was in her running shorts by the counter. He entered, went straight beside her and started gently petting her buttocks, then he pressed the flash by grabbing one cheek with all 5 fingers and said: "you run a lot, your butt's firm. Thak you." She slapped his hand, pushed it away & wispered: "Max is sleeping behind us. Not now...Are you out of your mind?" He kissed her on each shoulder asnd left the kitchen. I never discussed the matter with either of my parents.
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Anyway many years later i was getting a kick out of situations when a man is hitting on my wife. My wife was a looker (& still is) & was often hitted on.
Upon return i'd fuck his wife too.
The police chief fucked the young man's wife real good & she liked it that way. Years later he will guck his wife too & she will also like it. The point is that the same guy enjoyed watching his mom and now he will watch his wife.
Call me a dick fuvk if you want but i like the scenario.
The story is excellent except for abuse of young women (but yes - they all are 18+ & the story is marked non-consent).
The Police Chief years ago fucked the private detective's mother & now is going to fuck the wife.
The scenes where the chief fucks the mother in presence of her husband & her son are priceless.
cuckoldtony knows how to say a lot on less than one page.
The story is truly erotic & then some.
The story is fiction, so don't worry: if somebody is going to fuck your wife or your mother, it won't be because of this story but because it is your karma.
Abuse of 18 year old girls is NOT my cup of tea but to each his own
Is that they are all just disgusting characters. Really unlikeable. Which makes the story no fun to read. 1 star.
The series examines the dark side of human psyche.
Depiction of his mother when he was a 10-year-old child is priceless.
This excerpt is priceless:
"After all those years of watching him use my mom, here I was waiting for my wife to walk in and spread her legs for him. A nervous excitement was spreading through my body, starting at my iron hard cock."
:-)
Excerpt from the story:
Mom was bent over, her skirt up around her waist showing her stocking tops and suspenders, her hands tightly grasping the back of her favourite chair. She looked so beautiful when she was enjoying a good fuck, her eyes were half closed and her mouth wide open as her body jerked rhythmically to the pounding she was getting from the fat boy
I looked beyond my panting and moaning mother and saw that grin again, always that fucking grin. The fat bastard was looking right at me, sweating and grinning as he fucked my mom in front of her family. I saw him reach round her front and tear her blouse open, buttons flying across the floor, and then roughly pull her big tan lacy bra up to release her massive fleshy breasts. They bounced and swung as Chief Martin pounded her harder.
(PRICELESS!)
Excerpt from the story:
"... he fucked my mom in front of her family. I saw him reach round her front and tear her blouse open, buttons flying across the floor, and then roughly pull her big tan lacy bra up to release her massive fleshy breasts. They bounced and swung as Chief Martin pounded her harder."
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I first was a voyeur son.
Years later later, I was a voyeur husband.
Excerpt from the story:
"... and then roughly pull her big tan lacy bra up to release her massive fleshy breasts. They bounced and swung as Chief Martin pounded her harder."
EROTIC, KINKY.
Except from the story (SPOILER ALERT!)
Quote:
... and saw that grin again, always that fucking grin. The fat bastard was looking right at me, sweating and grinning as he fucked my mom in front of her family. I saw him reach round her front and tear her blouse open, buttons flying across the floor, and then roughly pull her big tan lacy bra up to release her massive fleshy breasts. They bounced and swung as Chief Martin pounded her harder.
End quote.
In my book this is a five star story
Love it. Bravissimo!
👍👍, 5.0=100% (★★★★★).
The story is unabashedly kinky.
Unlike me, the protagonist is a big-time sick fuck (I am a borderline sick fuck, OK?)
He is a voyeur son, voyeur husband, cuckold; he likes to be humiliated.
I LOVED the series.