What Happened Last Night? Ch. 01

Excellent

Very good writen story. Please keep this up, I am looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

Looking forward to Ch. 02 sooo much! Good job!

Awesome writing, very hot!

Commence with the hot gypsies!

Well done.

I loved your slow, detailed descriptions and use of language.

Holy shit!!

New all time favorite story!!

Thanks!

Thanks everyone. It's encouraging to get such great feedback. I'll get you chapter 2 just as soon as I can.

wow

Can't wait for more!

Wow +10

I don't usually like cheating stories but your words have somehow bypassed that. Great description, I'm not sure if I'd have been able to resist either. Pity he's such a skinny tosser.

Holy shit!

Words escape me. Incredibly wicked.

Awesome!

I'm not into cheating stories either but this is totally hot!! Love to hear more of the pushing boundaries n big cock action n less of the cheating hating him shit, haha!! Just let him be less of a cock, she splits with jason n I'd love to hear more hotness!!! Great writing!!

outstanding, outshining

totally awesome

oy.

addictive. completely.

Write more. Soon. Please.

Write more. Soon. Please.

Are you ever gonna finish this? Loved it

This is one of the best (if not the best) story on this site. I beg of you, please write more! You have a gift for it.

Finish it

Please finish its been almost 3 months

2 chp?

Will you add another chapter soon? Loved this story

very nice :)

I want you to write more of this! Really, it's just so very good to read :)

More!

This was great and says ch.01 so I am waiting! Great first story!

Chapter 2?

Any idea on when chapter 2 is coming? I'm checking weekly to see if it's happened yet. Very much looking forward to it!

I hope this is only the beginning.

Keep up the good work. Are there eager young things out there doing this?

Absolutely love this story! Love the dirty talk during sex!! I showed this to my gf she read it twice and... just let me say thank you! Agree with some about the cheating bit, but I still love this story and re-read it at least twice a month.

Need more!

Oh, please keep going. You have the most perfect erotic style I have ever read. I have exhausted myself rereading it. I need the next chapter.

Awesome story!

This story is the best one that I have read on this site, and I can't tell you how many times I've cum just from reading this story! I hope you come out with chapter 2 soon cause I can't wait! :)