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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Interesting...

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 12 years ago
Good start

Good start, I hope you intend to finish the story, it really sucks to leave a story half finished.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

It seemed to me that you only had a few grammatical errors, well written piece!

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