All Comments on 'I See a Red Door Ch. 07'

Very good. Please keep writing.

I do hope that the story will continue. Just the right touch of "psycho" behavior on her part, with him being drawn like a moth to the flame. His better judgement tells him to run, but he cant resist finding out what is behind the door she has opened within him.

Neil is now primed to be completely molded into the image, any image Alana chooses.

Please let this be the beginning and not the end.

I can't help to say, "Continue the story please!". This is a great story. I've yet to find such a sexual but at the same time, intelligent story. It has meaning in it to me and this is the biggest cliff hanger I've ever please.

-Jimmy

Please, more. Don't abandon the story!

Update on the story?

This is the best story I've read on here. Please tell us more

So happy i ran across this today. I'm hooked! Can't wait for the next phase of his development. Poor thing :)

Great story so far, I am really enjoying the relationships and the dream-like flashbacks are intense! You rock

this is a gripping story, i can’t wait for more!

As the author, I had decided this WAS the end. Neil has passed through to insanity already. Anything new to the story would be a waste, wouldn't it? The reader adds his own assumptions and the reader can take the story further in his head...the way HE wants it, not the way I might.

Vote if you really want more. :)

Just let it end, it's getting more & more ridiculous with every chapter. I'm very sorry as I do not normally like to criticize either author or story but really ?

Loved the story. Right now it has wrapped itself around my mind like a tight discipline hood, trapping me in a churning fantasy world that may or may not be my own. Hard to imagine a more fitting end.

Well written with insight in the twisted characters’ minds. I was reading whilst in chastity, getting all flustered and worked up, in frustrating and delightful agony. Would love to read a how the relationship furtehr develops.

So curious if she breaks him permanently

My wife has kept me in a rubber bag, for 23 hours a day, for the last ten years, masturbating endlessly, in my own filth, hosed out once a week. One hour's freedom in 24, menaced by a cattle-prod, unless I get back into the bag without resistance. I am fed via a zippered opening at my mouth, with barely enough air to preserve life, via two small metal-ringed holes at my nostrils...healthy puree, and copious spurts of fresh semen, pumped down my throat, by the several regular customers who pay her for the privilege of using my mouth as a cum-dump...a true sexual sadist, she is always dreaming up ways to humiliate me further, and longer, and I'm pretty sure at some stage this will become 24/7 for as long as I remain physically healthy enough, though quite insane by then...

Well written. Too heavy. Hints if him changing him but not followed through. Abrupt ending - no ending. Really poor