All Comments on 'Used and Abused'

by WhispersOfJ

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pavlovpavlovabout 12 years ago
More! More!

What happened next? Any anal? Cum shower? Gimme more! Gimme more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
As erotic as watching paint dry. . .

Not a sign of any understanding of sex, or lust, or women here, just a weary robotic recital of what this cock did next and what that cock did next and oh how she loved it, what a slut. Boring from beginning to end: if that's the best this 'author' can do with an erotic narrative, he'd be well advised to take up brick laying instead -- as in, this brick goes here, that brick goes there etc etc etc. See? 'S easy. Just like writing a story as hopeless as this dross.

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