by Cromagnonman
Good Tale. Interesting story line. Not the same ole same old. I like different ideas.
Good story telling....
Tazz317, SHUT-UP!! Can someone please explain to me what the fuck this person is going on about?!?!?!
....about Cmm's stories. How he structures the first half of his creation to convince us readers to expect a certain ending.
Then suddenly, WHAM! BAHM! A completely unexpected twist in a completely unexpected direction to a dramatically satisfying ending.
again far too much detail left out...far too rushed to a happy ending...needed filling out with more details on the how and why and what happened after the bust...some stories you make fun and interesting...others like this are too rushed to an ending leaving too much of the nitty gritty out....could have been a much better detective type of story as to what went on and how ....
Love romantic stories where the underdog is rescued and the right amount of sex helps.
I’d have much more to say if I’d just found out that my husband was a child pornographer.
Good story. A little sparse on details but still entertaining. And well written, as usual for Cmm.
nice little yarn, touches on a couple of nasty subjects but well written as usual.very entertaining