All Comments on 'Vanessa and Veronica Ch. 08'

great chapter i can nit wait until someone kills Bradford and I hope it is Veronica. I look forward to see just how powerful Victoria is i like the idea that she can see and sense the Bradford I do agree that Bradford is a gutless worm and the world will be a better place once he torn a asunder. Super chapter and thank you for all of your hard work looking forward to the next chapter

I like the strong females of this clan. Instead of swooning, they come out swinging. Both V&V are enigmatic, and I look forward to exploring their inner psyche as the story unfolds. Nice.

Jamie and Vic in a few years? Masterful, can't wait to see 'squirt' grow up.

Thank you!

M1

This is just to damn wonderful. It still amazes me how you can link all of the characters together and it all just makes sense. Even with a hint of who Victoria's mate will be is just a tease within it's self. Although with that I would love to know how Jamie was turned and or even the sex of Manson and Tony's child will be. Damn how I love this family and thank you for giving them to us.

Hell I'm still looking or wishing I could find a mate that will protect and love as fiercely as those Sinclaires and let's not forget Mason and Maurice ( Big Ass Smile )

Great update. I am hoping that the next chapter will be much sooner. PLease hurry.

Damn, your killing me here, first Jamie and Victoria being mates, which i hope your planning to write about, because" Lucy you have some plaining to do" about how it came to be that Jamie is a vampire,Secondly just wow the things that little Victoria can do amazing. great update can't wait to read more, please hurry.

Ok, so cool beans on the whole Jamie/Victoria thing. That will be cool to read about - just explain how Jamie became a vampire when he was born human & i'll be a happy little clam about it. There isn't much Patrick can do or say to Bradford, so why he wants to is just a matter of guilt.

My big question is: who the heck was Louise talking to? Was it Ethan? Was it Martin? Or is there a Sinclaire left unaccounted for that has not been introduced yet?

And what's Bradford's history? Excellent update - 5 stars.

In Masons story, Mason explained to Jamies mother that when Jamie is of age to understand, he will have the choice whether he wanted to be turned.

I liked it alot. The Sinclaire's have strong women in their family. Thanks for giving a small inside on Mason, Toni & Jamie. So the tall handsome guy Louise was talking to...is that one of Martin's sons? I can't wait for your next update.

A powerful sistah connect and superb telling. Love how you pair sweet Torie up with Jamie. You plant good solid seedlings for future spin-offs. Girl you have seriously mad skills. Now when does boyfriend get the vibe that Rosie has reincarnated into this life? I can't wait until that bell goes off for him!!!! Branford is going to be so twisted up in the game it won't even be funny!!

Work it!!! Work the Magic, sistah!!!!

Woo Wee talking bout a great update just wish there was more though hey what can I say I'm greedy. So nice to have Mason Toni and Jamie have an appearance in this story too so I take it that Jamie decided to be turned then huh and he's gonna be Victoria's mate when she's old enough boy is he gonna have his hands full with her she's already giving him attitude being at such a young age too funny. I'm also happy to see Patrick and Kevyn there too now I'm looking forward to see what happens next I want them to hurry and get to where Ronnie is and also in the mean time for her to be let loose and start to give Brad the beat down he so needs lol!! Please update again real soon thanks!

I can't wait to find out who the guy is talking to Lu.

Furthermore does Victoria kntow Jamie's her mate?

As for Bradford why did he choose to strike now? He's got to know his days are number.

I am sure that Patrick has been feeling bad enough about his past, and this new situation must hurt him deeply and make him feel sheepish in front of his new mate. Since Veronica has a PhD in psychiatry, she has the knowledge to deal with her captor's issues. Coupled with her personality and faith in her family, this guy doesn't stand a chance!

I seriously thought for a second that Louise would be Bradfords mate, and I didn't realize that so much time had passed since Mason. When you said that Jamie was 21, I did a double take, I was thinking wow, time flies. It seems like he should still be 5 or something.

This chapter is great cuz I received a update on everyone!!! I kno Ethan,Rik, and the crew will get her back!! I love the update on Jamie who s all grown now/a vampire cuz he was very protective of Victoria. I love how u combined the stories but can seperate them too!!! Az keyan said its a family afar!!! That includes Mason's family too!! I cant wait to read the next chapter. A great spinnoff from this would be about Jamie/Victoria getting together. cuz he did say he could wait another centery for her!!

If she was his mate, why did he not die when she killed herself? Was he mistaken? I thought you can't deny the mating call even if he wanted to take there relationship slow, because Patrick did the same thing with Kevyn, but he was drawn to her where he watched her at night

This chapter is bringing hints of Jamie & Victoria being mates. LOVES IT!!!!

I think Louise was talking to one of Martins son. (Could Louise be Nathan or Joseph mate can't to find out)

I have always loved Ethan & Katrina! Reading about them and their connection makes me smile!

I'm seeing a story building for Louise maybe!?

Keep up the good work!

I know everyone is hating Bradford, but if he were truly evil he would have killed Veronica right away. I think he's just "mad with grief" and will want to be talked out of revenge by Veronica or Patrick, and I hope he gets a chance at happiness with Louise as his new mate. But I'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out. Thanks for the updates on Mason, Toni, and Jamie, I was wondering about them.

Yves

I luv the character Patrick but he must've been 1 cruel sob 2 not compell his victim 2 forget & who is Louise talkin 2? Like a true fan, I knew somthin was up wen it was mentioned Pat felt protective of her. KEEP EM COMMIN, AS U CAN SEE WE'RE LUVIN IT!

Your writing is improving and improving with every new submission! While this story is getting me in a tizzy (I want the Sinclaires to have an other worldly beat down on Bradford Jefferson), I am STILL stuck on Justine!!! Where does your mind come up with all of these plots and characters and insane cliffhangers?!?

Just amazing work, Kal! Amazing! :)

This story just keeps getting beter and beter. While it makes me crazy. I like how you are ending the stories with a cliffhanger. Yes it's furstating but it makes me excited about wondering whats going to happen next and looking forward to reading more. I loved the way you tied in characters from your other stories into this chapter and set the ground work for two new stories that would be great. A story about Jamie and grown up Victoria would be very interesting. I don't know who Louise was talking to but I'm guessing it was probally one of Martin's sons. Poor Lousie seems like she's spent most of life catering to and taking care of her mom and siblings. So she deserves to have some take care of her for a change. I hope she gets a story of her own.

Thanks for the Mason, Toni and Jamie update! Louise how dose she figure in to this, possibly she is the mate of bradford. I also wonder Kevyn has all these soothing empathic abilities are her abilities supernatural is she a healer? Just asking. Jamie is 21 and how old is Victoria? Mason is getting in this family one way or another(lol). I am looking forward to your updates.

I thought the same thing regarding Louise possibly being Bradford's mate! Would be interesting... but maybe too easy... Might just seem like a fix, but I suppose it would depend on how it came about. Anyway, great story so far Kalamazoo!

Who knew.... I love how this is coming together. Glad that Mason and Toni popped up in the story... I had hoped that they would have been more Present in Patrick's story. On to the next chapter.

Your stories are so good and have me enthralled...I think you should try and get them published....I read alot and your stories are a lot better than some i have to pay for...try it and see