Love, love, love this gentle story.
I love this story but again an ending can't wait for the next chapter
I so love this story. Luma has grown so much, showing his love more and more, being so kind-hearted. I am hoping you will have the next chapter soon...
I'm still excited by each and every comment I get. Thank you so much.
My posting schedule is that every time a chapter is posted I submit the next one, so if isn't coming fast enough, take it up with the editors :p
I just started reading this story a couple days ago and I love it! I can't wait to find out what happens next and how the relationships develop between them all.
I also very much appreciate that you're posting frequently. It's very frustrating to have to wait 6months to a year for another chapter of a story to come out.
Happy Writing to you!
I thoroughly enjoyed the story till now... but I still wonder how the guy could have the energy for so much sexual activity... no doubt he had to feed so often... LOL!!!
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