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Fallen Ch. 12

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by Anonymous

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by cliffgirl0803/16/12

A little drama

Love, love, love this gentle story.

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by lonesomedove6603/16/12

Another good story to wait on

I love this story but again an ending can't wait for the next chapter

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by 4catsrmine03/18/12

I so love this story. Luma has grown so much, showing his love more and more, being so kind-hearted. I am hoping you will have the next chapter soon...

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by Nephylim03/18/12

Thank You

I'm still excited by each and every comment I get. Thank you so much.

My posting schedule is that every time a chapter is posted I submit the next one, so if isn't coming fast enough, take it up with the editors :p

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by uchena03/18/12

:-)

I just started reading this story a couple days ago and I love it! I can't wait to find out what happens next and how the relationships develop between them all.

I also very much appreciate that you're posting frequently. It's very frustrating to have to wait 6months to a year for another chapter of a story to come out.

Happy Writing to you!
Uchena

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by Anonymous03/18/12

I am enjoying it.....

I thoroughly enjoyed the story till now... but I still wonder how the guy could have the energy for so much sexual activity... no doubt he had to feed so often... LOL!!!

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