All Comments on 'The Dock Ch. 02'

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billyjim55billyjim55about 12 years ago
gr8 new chapter

thanks for bringing this back to life. I hope you have more coming soon. Its wide open and cant wait to see how it unfolds. ty

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

i love it, i can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
could be good BUT

you are way to slow at adding chapters, this one took two years. IF you continue keep it to just them no other relatives or outsiders and keep all the fetish and BDSM crap out of it it just drags it into the gutter.

Rugrat60Rugrat60about 10 years ago
Very Nice

Again I like the characters and the way the story moved along. I'll be reading more of your stories later.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Don't let someone else tell you how to write your story. I love it so far, and I can't wait for another chapter!

curt6986curt6986almost 2 years ago

great second part. you are a great writer and storyteller keep it up.

unclemerv77unclemerv77over 1 year ago

love it when everything comes together

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