by Bellatrixie
Really nicely done. Your leisurely spoken pace, with tiny breathless comment interspersed, was perfect. The writing is quite good indeed, softer and romantic but still explicit - it is a very nice piece!
Your voice and story is incredibly erotic. Thank you for this.
The further this went, the more I wanted to be in that cabin...blew me away.
Loved this so much. The story and imagery were delicious.
Thanks for sharing it.