All Comments on 'The Cabin (Bella's Version)'

by Bellatrixie

Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
RicWritesRicWritesabout 12 years ago
Sometimes 'vanilla' is exactly the right flavor!

Really nicely done. Your leisurely spoken pace, with tiny breathless comment interspersed, was perfect. The writing is quite good indeed, softer and romantic but still explicit - it is a very nice piece!

HeyAllHeyAllabout 12 years ago
I really enjoyed this.

Your voice and story is incredibly erotic. Thank you for this.

MrWhiteTigerMrWhiteTigerabout 12 years ago
Hot!!!

The further this went, the more I wanted to be in that cabin...blew me away.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
wow

Loved this so much. The story and imagery were delicious.

Thanks for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
5 stars

I love your voice. This was very erotic.

dave_L2LPdave_L2LPover 10 years ago
Wow...

Beautifully erotic and romantic

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous