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Average: The Beginning Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/20/12

Interesting gift

So Connor influences Avery's dreams?

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by cliffgirl0803/20/12

Great story, imaginative. Both boys dreaming of each other, but it sounds like the sex isn't a dream.

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by Anonymous03/20/12

Sleepwalking????or in this case sleepf***ing???

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by Anonymous03/22/12

I think we have found Connor's gift ^.^ how awesome

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Love it, can't wait for more

When is the next chapter being released?
I can't wait for what's to come

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by 88nicegirl12/07/13

More please!!!!

You are a wonderful writer. The imagery is impressive. Please finish this. I have to know how it ends!!!

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