All Comments on 'Average: The Beginning Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Interesting gift

So Connor influences Avery's dreams?

cliffgirl08cliffgirl08about 12 years ago

Great story, imaginative. Both boys dreaming of each other, but it sounds like the sex isn't a dream.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Sleepwalking????or in this case sleepf***ing???

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

I think we have found Connor's gift ^.^ how awesome

Littleblackdress54Littleblackdress54over 11 years ago
Love it, can't wait for more

When is the next chapter being released?

I can't wait for what's to come

88nicegirl88nicegirlover 10 years ago
More please!!!!

You are a wonderful writer. The imagery is impressive. Please finish this. I have to know how it ends!!!

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