All Comments on 'Thanksgiving, Came on Thursday'

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JonTaylorJonTaylorabout 12 years ago
Nice

The power of sex to heal, in a nutshell.

quiverclawquiverclawabout 12 years ago
what?

you mean thats it? well thats disappointing.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
A #10 DAY TO CUM

and go back to the reservation. TK U MLJ LV NV

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 12 years ago
Not a bad start

Not a bad start, you could have embellished a lttle more.

Don't let the others get you down, you'll get better with time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

That's it?!?! Come on finish your stories or did you get bored?

PolyLvrPolyLvrabout 11 years ago
Fine

I thought the story was fine, the way it ended. I think there could have been a bit more character development to flesh it out though.

TigerladyandhimTigerladyandhimalmost 10 years ago
Short and Sweet

Now that's the sort of rehab the VA should be providing.

Loved the story

afosi2604afosi2604about 2 months ago

Brevity is not always a bad thing. There is an opportunity here to develop the relationship, but that would only be if the author feels there is a larger story to be told.

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