All Comments on 'Don't You Want Me'

by JukeboxEMCSA

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zena99zena99almost 12 years ago
????

I can only hope that it is not in fact the ending........

vanfilmguyvanfilmguyalmost 12 years ago
Dont you want to do more?

I realize that most of the stories you do are short, but this one could use a few more chapters. :)

BlueFinchBlueFinchalmost 12 years ago
Hilarious Concept

I love your sense of humour. The man with a the sex ray misfires, ha!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
One of your best

I truly enjoyed this story from beginning to end. I really hope you add a second chapter, as while the general eroticism from the situation and from Madeline's perspective is very tantalizing, there is little in terms of sexual contact beyond what could be done in a bar booth. Please Jukebox, I implore you; write more of these characters, it would be brilliant

FallenAlfarFallenAlfaralmost 12 years ago
Make a sequel!!

If only i had a device to brainwash people......the good thing is that at least enough of her mind was leftover that she wasn't left a drooling vegetable, and she even helped him with his screw-up! This is 5 star material.

zena99zena99over 8 years ago
I love a happy ending

But this just begs for a continuation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Good heavens! That was awful! “Happy ending” indeed!

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