All Comments on 'Ode to The Aquarius King'

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SamuelxSamuelxabout 12 years ago
King Needs His Queen

You simply rock, my sexy lady. I loved this story. How are you today ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

A match made in heaven, and the bedroom, as Samuel X

(your Aquarius King) meets Kandy5647. Finally!

Liked it, and would encourage you to keep on writing.

However, I feel that some of the writing looks a bit rushed in

places, and that more attention to details would enhance the stories.

For example, in this particular story, no lube appears to be used when

either ass is fucked. In addition, your description of what positions

your Acquarius King are in during the opening paragraphs of the story

could be made clearer, and less confusing. Thanks.

More please. Would be nice to see you and Samuel X team up

from time to time, to jointly write some extemely hot erotica. :-)

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