by oOScarletWingsOo
A great story with great build up and a fantastic sex scene truly great to read i love f*cking in the rain.
Other than the very dangerous business of being outside in an Oklahoma thunder storm ... a very nice story
I love your writing style and use of prose. I also love the idea of making love in the rain which might encourage me to submit an old story with a rainy scene in it.
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Such wonderful and descriptive writing. I now too want to make love in the rain.
Beautiful prose.
picnics in the wildnerness work every time. rain or sunshine.
that said, the sex in the rain was really hot! shows that if the setting is erotic enough, you don't need more than 1 page. clever tagline.
and the last line was perfect.
I appreciate you all taking the time to either vote or post a comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.