All Comments on 'Forces of Nature'

by oOScarletWingsOo

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Brilliant

A great story with great build up and a fantastic sex scene truly great to read i love f*cking in the rain.

r_d_txnr_d_txnalmost 12 years ago
Nice

Other than the very dangerous business of being outside in an Oklahoma thunder storm ... a very nice story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Beautifully orchestrated

DavidAngelo474DavidAngelo474almost 12 years ago

I love your writing style and use of prose. I also love the idea of making love in the rain which might encourage me to submit an old story with a rainy scene in it.

Davidangelo474@gmail.com

PilauPilaualmost 12 years ago

Such wonderful and descriptive writing. I now too want to make love in the rain.

Beautiful prose.

GobletHolly182GobletHolly182almost 12 years ago
ha, take note, gentlemen...

picnics in the wildnerness work every time. rain or sunshine.

that said, the sex in the rain was really hot! shows that if the setting is erotic enough, you don't need more than 1 page. clever tagline.

and the last line was perfect.

oOScarletWingsOooOScarletWingsOoalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments

I appreciate you all taking the time to either vote or post a comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

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