All Comments on 'Sheet Metal Memories'

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I really enjoyed your story. It wasn't the usual wife-cheating story. Being a car guy myself, I can appreciate the car telling you things. No matter what others say, keep up the great writing. Thanx

Nothing else to say. Dull cuckold wimp story..

I found this excellent! Then I got to laugh even more as I read the comments! Wow, some people are really literal. Keep up the good work and send us more from left field.

They have not got any children so I think only 1 couse would be good to let his wife remain if he wanted to hide much money from her for the 3-4 years later divorce proceedings.

I like that.

Thank you for this story! What a great story line!

His victory was complete, his competition destroyed, and she knows that just one indiscretion will be the end of her.

Tell me, how is that being a spineless cuckold wimp?

and his Jag (a gentleman!)

Much better than 'My Mother, the Car!' (a US TV series with Dick VanDyke). Quirky as it gets. Also reminds me of Koster's novel 'The Dissertation' from the standpoint of highly unusual sources of intelligence!

5*

Unusual enough to enjoy.

As to cuckold wimp, cuckold, yes, he had no choice about that. Wimp? He mows down all the people who fucked his wife and he has his wife totally under his control. He isn't living in a hotel drinking himself into a stupor and he hasn't paid his wife any money. She can't divorce him unless she wants her reputation totally destroyed and he can pretty much do whatever he wants. She is being followed and cannot hook up with anyone. Not too wimpy by my evaluation. I personally might not want to be saddled with such a wife but he does owe her ten years worth of revenge. Keep watching her, keep her under control, screw her as he wants to. Dump her later. It works for him.

Nice dark tale... Brings to mind the motto, better the enemy u know than one you dont.... Replace enemy with whore/slut. Something for the TTB crowd to ponder.

Great story - loved it. Just enough off the normal beaten path to make it interesting.

Being a TTB guy, I basically liked the idea of this story. However, it would have been far better with more depth, dialogue and pain for the betrayers. The reader would like to see some real retribution for the wife and business partner as well as the others who had a part in the husband's cuckolding. He owed all of them big time. Now the husband needs to find a woman who is worth loving.

Not too believable but a good story and a good read. One of those stories you wish could be real, where the bad guys get what is coming to them.

Thanks for the story

Well, a trouble free Jaguar , I don't believe that!, Partner stealling millions, maybe, Wife fucking partner for ten years, don't believe it. Why? You don't say. What will he do about it? Nothing! Where is the plot? where is the story? Why do we care?.

Sell to a whore house why stay married. 3 stars

He had to find out one way or another. At least the Jag was still his friend. Man's best friend. His car. Oh, and by the way:

I HATE CHEATING WIVES

HA

but stay away from SS06'S Tang. TK U MLJ LV NV

I was able to suspend disbelief and accept the talking car and all the rest, but a reliable Jaguar? Lucas, the Prince of Darkness, forbids it! Otherwise, what a quirky, interesting story! Made my afternoon.

anyone who has been betrayed knows how cuckdogg feels; like a cuck. the problem for those wankers is that cucking did not continue; long term cucking is good medicine but they need continuous long term cucking, hence the 3 stars.

If by "knows" you are referring to the Biblical interpretation of the word, cuckeye definitely "knows" betrayed.

Beats the crap out of some of the latest trash stories submitted to loving wives. At least I got a chuckle out of this one. Not a bad read author. Short and to the point. Thanks for the entertainment. ML

Why did he not go for real revenge make her sign a post nuptial agreement, she gets a limited allowance no more affairs, he gets money, women and the world.

He should have made her suck his cock clean of her shit and then pissed in her mouth making sure she swallowed all of his liquid gold

Good Read.

Thanks for sharing it!

It was a different type of story--short, I LIKED IT.

The Story you should try writing more stories with Objects telling on the Cheaters.

if a Car would work what about a Bed or Shower.

Maybe a sequel with a real ending.

Very good! I really like the car.

please keep them coming,cheating wives. this one was different

Liked the plot devices and as always, sluts should always get screwed in the end.

A Jag that starts every time and has never had a problem?

That's almost as believable as a wimp assed lawyer keeping his slut wife around after hanging the horns on him for ten years.

Thanks for the read

Hoepfully included her life being stripped of the amenities she had, to a significant extent where she's in a guilded cage.

"After we cleaned up we made simple pact: she fucks no one but me. Period."

That is a BRILLIANT idea! A lot of couples should do that!

Maybe invite the family...some friends...exchange some tokens of fidelty to remind each other and symbolize the pact...maybe make it a legal document or some kind of license...make it a party

Oh...wait...um...never mind...

Adultery will only get you a divorce. Catching your wife or husband in an affair with one or hundred paramours will not get you one dime more.

you wrote this in a way that all men who have been married to a cheating bitch can relate. i did not have to seek revenge though, karma has been real nasty to her.

DAMN !! Clinical Efficiency...

Good story and well written.

leave no stones unturned and take out the trash. TK U MLJ LV NV

I know that it is just a story so I give kudos to the author.

And who gives a fuck about reality this is fiction. What idiot complains about the law not being accurate when you have a fucking talking car?

An interesting flash story. Why keep the bitch?

I hate cheating whores. But I like honest Jags.

A five for originality.

A pleasant piece of revenge fiction. Nice, original angle and swift, merciless vengeance. Well done!

He was a clueless cuck when early in the tale he admitted he drives a mustang.

He "finally" gets to stick his dick in the WHORE wife's ass that's had 100's (?) of other cocks in it for the past TEN YEARS ... oh I and the CUNT "also promised" not to fuck anymore men .. and that's what you call revenge?!?

BogartsCUCK wouldn't know "Revenge" if it kicked him in his two inch dick!!!

Decent guy - clueless like so many in RL -

He makes them pay - the partner is destroyed - quietly efficiently and completely, the wife is now hobbled and his slave - it works - he has already been abused and exposed to whatever shit she had done - now he gets his and she gets shit on for a change.

The car was the best part of the story, I can understand why he wanted to keep it, but he needed to rid himself of the bitch even if it cost him money

if settling for damaged goods and giving up on having a meaningful relationship is enough for him, he has my sympathy.

has he checked her (and himself) for STD's lately?

Wouldn't he be Geoffrey? <grin>

For a powerful man with a lot of money, keeping a cheating slut would seem like a bad idea. He couldn't figure out how to sell the firm, hide some money and give her nothing? How about selling her to a Mexican whorehouse? But to keep her with little or no punishment or revenge seems like a lose/lose proposition for him. The ending ruined the story.

The best thing about this story is the attitude. Certainly this was a man who tried to have a decent marriage. He treated his wife well. When he found out what she really was, love evaporated, and common sense prevailed. Divorce her? Why bother? She is a slut wife, so simply use her as a slut wife and save the money on the divorce. Smart.

My butt

Pretty sure she and all her lovers would have come to a very slow extremely painful drawn out ending if bogart was the husband

Try a different ending for the escapades of a Helena Montana area real life serial cheater

Get indo on her and more from Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com

A bit unfleshed-out

But he should have had Mrs Harris and Wilson arrested for embezzlement. Usually partnerships include sections on embezzlement where the criminal partner loses their partnership shares. That keeps the partners honest.

As for the consequences for the wife, I agree with the author to make her role subservient to him. He will literally keep her on a short list. His needs will only be met, not her needs. Keep the bitch guessing what will come next. A divorce is stupid since he will lose half of everything. They have been together more than ten years. In California, the wife automatically gets 50%.

Could use a bit more development.

Especially Jeffery

A little weird, but not a bad story. A little short on details, especially details about how all the wrongdoers got punished. In particular, the wife. I mean stealing money from a man is one thing but stealing his wife is, in my opinion, a capital offense. I realize the courts don’t believe that way, but vigilante justice can be severe, as well as anonymous.

what a tale the could tell. TK U MLJ LV NV

I guess you have to be British to understand this one.

It's good writing, but maybe too much on the dry side for me. I realise the stiff upper lip is probably mandatory, but it would've been nice to shake the tree a little harder.

Yeah. About the only thing I would add is that she now drives, oh, maybe an old dodge polars or something like that.

And this is a story that just was to short.....and it ends..............

Memories of the classic movie 'Christine'.

3 stars - standard BTB story - nothing new or unique here.

Oh, you and the wife have a "simple pact" now .... that's so much better than, I don't know, "marriage vows", maybe?

Period.

AAA+

funny and a good twist to an old theme. Keeping her was the final insult to her

Love your unconventional style. With tongue firmly planted in cheek! 5+++/5!!!

Too bad the cunt wife did not go to jail.

What no post-nup, if she commits adultery she looses it ALL (including her claim to his company)?

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What car replaced the Jag? A Honda Civic....

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Almost 6*****, Hooyah but for the missing post-nup....

🤣 Love it

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A fun read, and very well written. Of course, you truly stretch the willing suspension of disbelief at the start with ". . . the Jag, never a bit of trouble. The engine started first time, every time." :-)

Be good to Geoffrey; get a good body man to handle those worn areas.

Author’s oblique approach to sarcasm contributes to a pleasant read.

Ten years getting fucked over, by almost everyone he trusted, and he never had a clue. Now he doesn't even have the whore wife driving the car, so the car can't tell him what she's doing, where she's going, who's she seeing, what she's saying. Sounds like the stupid cuck still hasn't wised up. He got what he married, so he got what he deserved. Thanks for the effort.

All machines are, and always have been, female!

Like the premise, 5* for that.

Certainly the partner should have gone to jail, and the wife could have been framed to look like she was part of the scheme so she would have gone to jail as well. A nasty trial with pictures showing motive and outing her as the slut that she is! C'mon guy, let's be a little more aggressive here.