All Comments on 'Surf God of Malibu'

by jamesonx

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geemeedeegeemeedeeabout 12 years ago
I hope you explore ...

... the thought process behind the dominant and submissive behavior the men are exhibiting. Some conversations about it would be cool. And then there's the whole bi/gay thing. Also: the surf god is a dick. (Peter, the boy who would never grow old, is an apt name for the aging surfer bum.) Will the love of a good man humble him and give his life purpse? :0)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Peter's kind of mean-spirited…

…I hope he really appreciates Jacob through the continuation of the series. Jacob deserves to be opened up lovingly — there's an obvious lack of love in the rest of his life.

I'm also looking forward to Peter discovering his love for rimming ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Absolutely great

I come back to it again and again. Very sexy and sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

couldn't get past the "how great, beautiful and un-resistible I am to women and men" routine. You left out self-centered and egotistical.

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