All Comments on 'One Time at Band Camp...'

More, please...

Nice little story and, best of all, written properly and a pleasure to read without wincing at improper usage, spelling errors, etc.

Thank you.

Well, it's a winner for me. Thank you.

technically but lacked character development and dialog enough to see where the attraction might be that leads to romance.

are a favorite fantasy of mine. the conflict here was understated, but in a pleasantly realistic way. so many circumstances could have prevented it (jackson getting a real job, good weather, no barn) that their night together was something of a "perfect storm", a pun you may have intended?

from this talented young writer

A good story line and an excellent command of dialog.

5 Stars all the way and a fitting contender for the Earth Day Contest prize.

This was a very sexy story but it could have had more detail such as tan lines, thrust, cumshots, bouncing of tits, wetness... All and all it was a good and sexy story, keep up the good work.