by nerd4music
If this chapter is getting over writers block, I'm excited to see constant flow of writing. Awesome chapter! Can't wait for more.
i'm pissed about this update. pissed that it was so good and had to come to an end. i loved it. i'm excited to see where these two end up.
Your one of those great writers that I just cannot get enough of. I love all of your stories. Thanks for the great update.
You are my absolute favorite writer!!!!! Well worth the wait... I Always click..add to favorite stories and add favorite writer, after every update of yours and it Always say.... Already in favorites. Thats how wonderful of a writer you are. Excellent excellent update...I love these two.
Wow! You are such an amazing writer. The flow of the story, the humanity and sensuality of your characters- it's just incredible. Thank you so much for the update, patiently waiting for more!
But couldnt have been a bit longer.... Grady and Arden are hot... while both have to been broken they are good for one another...
Grreat job N4M!!!
It was an amazing update and I love how his hair was another step to letting go. You are so amazing and I am so excited to see where this story goes! Excellent update!
Great writing as usual. Please put Vegas back up somewhere. Want to go back and re-read it. just too good to read only once.
You are a freakin genius! What an update. Your muse is certainly in full voice. That was just superb writing definitely worth the wait. Well done lady!!!
Great update. You're so talented and you've truly been missed around here. Can't wait for more on this story and new ones!!! Glad things are going well with you too. Thanks so much for this update!
I love these two together. They've both been through things and they seem to be just what the other needs to fully move on. Can't wait to see what happens next.
These two are just so...sighs.... love them! I want more please
how do i love thee? let me count the ways .... this is awesome i luuuuurve these two.
hope whatever you have going on works out for the better
Cant wait to hear about the Broadcast and how Edie gets in his face.
and will Arden be there to B!tch slap her.
Don't keep us hanging. I couldn't take it!!! Excellent writing. Love the flawed main characters. I can't wait to see their relationship develop.
I really liked the little 'blog post' at the end. There is hope, for both of them. Looking forward to more!
I really loved this update can I just say wow it was so great can't wait to see how their relationship will continue to grow and they finally allow their friends to know that they're a couple if its not already suspected lol please update again real soon look forward to seeing what is gonna happen next thanks!!
Thank you for sharing. Please bring Edie back so he can drop-kick her to the curb with a smile.
Wow. I'm so glad to read how well this chapter turned out. It's absolutely amazing.
Not only is it a great update, but titling it with an Ellie Goulding song is icing on the cake. Looking forward to more.
This is one of the best interracial love stories I've ever read. Looking forward to chapter 7. I knew a Grady once, he was a good man. :)
This has become one of my favorites. Your characters and emotions are so realistic. Please update soon.
I hated the agony at the beginning - but fuck me this is brilliant!
Romantic and erotic by turns, this tale is frighteningly good. I just hope you get around to gracing us with another chapter.
As always it is well worth the wait. Brilliant story getting over edie is my favourite. Xx
Just kidding. Excellent as always. Work at your pace, the product shows it's right.
Love it. I hope2read more updates
Big fan of your stories here. Was just wondering if you plan on finishing this one. it's so good and I'm loving the male perspective. Would love to know how things wrap up :)
1st story of yours I've read. THANK YOU, I loved it. I think what I liked most was it was ACTUALLY a story, not just someone writing porn & throwing in a few "story" lines now & then.
I will be reading more of your stories & I HOPE you plan to finish this one soon.
Where are you?!? Or is this now a finished book and I can purchase it??? I would definitely buy... LoL I hope this finds you in good spirits! Please continue
Okay, I lied. Chapter 6 was absolutely necessary and has me feenin for Chapter 8, 9 , 10 and beyond! Your way with words is spellbinding and I'm so happy everytime I read one of your stories!! Love love love love! Please come back and finish this!
~ GreenRoots
im so frickin pissed ive read thru all 6 chapters in one day, gotten really into the story and characters (btw this is ur best work) and its unfinished...any chance of u completing on here? if not is it completed in novel? cmon n4m, gotta finish this one
Omg, i love the characters, their development and how they blend.. I need more!
I love this story. I only wish there was one more chapter. This feels, somehow, unfinished. Like there's more to be told. I know it's not my story, and it's not for me to decide, but it just feels like Arden and Grady need to share a little more with us. I love this so much, though. Thank you. I've been alone for over 15-years now, and my ex-husband was my "Edie". A lot of what happened resonated with me strongly, which is why I couldn't stop reading this. I only wish you hadn't stopped uploading to the site.
Great story, but it needs acouple of more chapters to finish the story.
Based on the title, this chapter should marked the end of the story. It was about how Grady recovered after breaking up with Edie. Once Grady began a new relationship with Arden, he recovered from his heartbreak. The story about Grady and Arden should be a separate storyline.