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Green Mother

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by Corpse_rider04/04/12

Eat your greens

Very well written short fantasy erotica. Liked it a lot.

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by Anonymous04/04/12

I liked it

You get a 5 from me. Good writing. Should I resist the temptation to parody the idiots who criticise stories for not being realistic? Maybe Chuck goes home, peels off the moss beard from his head and around his dick and steps into the shower. As the water washes off the blue dye says to himself, "Works every time!"

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by GobletHolly18204/05/12

neat transformation

from normal running girl to nature mother goddess. the chirping birds and colorful cum-blooming flowers gave this a lovely fairy tale/ferngully-ish feel. sexy and well-written, nice job.

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by Toscabu04/16/12

Hot

Nicely written. Thanks for a good description of one of my biggest fantasies!

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by Anonymous11/18/12

Sensual

Loved the description of the surrounding nature. It's so hot to think that the future of the earth depends on the son of Gaia impregnating a young lady!

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