All Comments on 'A Busride to Remember'

it's nice to see another pee fetish writer on Lit, there are so few of us here.

very good story but you're getting killed on your rankings due to the typos and formatting. you may want to check the style guidelines or use a volunteer editor for your next submission, because this story should be rated higher than a 3 if not for these errors.

keep at it. looking forward to more wet stories from you.

Thanks for this. It's a brilliant story, well composed, realistic (I could almost see them) and lasting. I love good pee desperation stories but sadly some are far too short. This one was just the right length and didn't stop with the first peeing.

Great stuff, keep up the good work.

, as a newbie to golden showers, i found this story quite a turn on for me. hope theres more to come . lit needs more pee stories.

Really enjoyed this. Lovely characters, I just love the way she just lets a little pee out on the bus and just lets a little run down her legs in the lobby. Lovely.

Awesome story, i peed my pants while reading it

great story and hot piss play. the misspellings were a little distracting but I still have it 5 stars.

Thank you for a delicious and fun tale!! Quite a turn on and thoroughly enjoyable!