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Xaxac Ch. 16

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by beyondeath07/07/12

More than very noteworthy

I hardly ever comment on Lit but felt compelled here because your story does not get the recognition it deserves. I am very intrigued by it. Once I read a chapter it stays with me for a while, disturbingly. The charm is in its mystique definitely but just a tiny bit of insight might help. It is at once terrible, appealing, frustratingly suspenseful, and the characters are all manners of twisted in one way or another. I know I will be haunted for a very long time if Xaxac does not make it. Very pleased that you decided to come back to it, hope you don't make us wait too long again. p.s. Why are the chapters posted twice? All the best

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by Anonymous07/11/12

i've read all your stuff. you've done quite well with the character, i'm very pleased. Will you carry this through to the end? Will soko, Shiron , KADE, Lanus, Niarra, the burning Dawn and others appear? Or will you end with the first moment Shiron and Xajac meet?

Either Way all this is really good, please keep it up.
KNIGHTS!...Bring them order.

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Yes i posted this same comment a few times on differant chapters, wanted to make sure you saw.

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