by silkstockingslover
This is a slam dunk!!! A hat trick. A four bagger!!! A 99 yard touchdown.
Can you tell I liked the story??? My compliments!!!!
Your only problem will be to try to top this story.
Thanks Don
I cant wait for these up coming chptrs. Its been hard waiting for these as it is lol. good work, I just hope he gets to keep control over el. so mom remains his . You write it Ill love it lol get the editor busy lol
This story talks about all my favorite subjects.....looking forward to the next chapter.
I also think that Dad knows about Mom and son and that he was getting off while the son was taking his mom in the kitchen...how else to explain the phone not being answered....Dad was busy "handling" something else.
Once again...this series is simply amazing!
Jaz, you hit another one out of the ball park! Can hardly wait for the next two chapters.
The affair he has with Miranda is very hot, but I think he knows that it isn't going to last very long,but it's still great for as long as it lasts.
I hope he knows what he is doing by involving his mother again with Ellie. That situation could blow up in his face if he doesn't cover all of the bases.
A damn good story with plenty of erotic sex.
Thanks for the good read.
Wow, Jasmine, that is such a hot story!
I can't imagine how you will top that in parts 4 and 5 but I look forward very much to finding out!
Thanks so much,
Pete
So very glad you've continued this series, it's one of my favorites! I'm definitely looking forward to the rest! Keep up the great work!
another great installment of another wonderful series you have here jasmine. i can't wait until the next chapters and see how curtis Doms ellie
Why do US mothers talk baby talk to their sons while they are fucking them?
Thank you for another warm, wet evening. They go by so quickly when I'm having fun. Yes, you have my vote. Does your imagination ever keep you up at night? lol
Gayle
This series is amazing! I had come across it by chance, and I had become intrigued by it since the first sentence. I am awaiting to see how Ellie will be dominated, and all the fun the four of them will have in Vegas! To get my attention like this is the mark of an excellent writer. Keep 'em cumming!
WOW! Please hurry and finish the rest! You have become my favorite author!!!
WOW! Please hurry and finish the rest! You have become my favorite author!!!
wow love your stuff i can't wait till the summer when the next two installments come out :-D
Fuck Yeah!! I can`t wait to hear more about the relationship with Meranda. can`t wait to see how the story pans out between mum and son and Ellie.
Holy shit!! sweet mother of god this story is really amazing now I can't stop thinking about next parts or series of this story :D
It is a great story. I see You get emotionally involved. I am eagerly
Looking forward to Your next installments.....
this is great, a real turn on well thought out fast paced, waiting for the next chapter.....
Can't wait for the next two chapters I need to read them now!
Can't wait for the next two chapters I need to read them now!
want to know what happen with his mom an her ex lesbian lover.. love this story..
Love this story line!!! I'm literally on the edge of my seat waiting for the next story to come out.
mmmmmmm my cock is rock hard, keep up the good work, my cock is staying up.
fucking hot,my cock is the hardest its been for a long time since i fucked my mom in the ass
Yes, the story is a good one, but there are a few issues to address. WHAT ABOUT THE FATHER, like is he that stupid not to figure out ANYTHING. I hope he does and kills his son and his wife. The other issue is that keep in mind, the kid was nothing until his mother gave him his first blow-job, and now he's treating her like a whore, with a sassey attitude, like he some stub that he thinks he is. I hope he gets his ass kid badley. I hope the little bastard gets whatever comes to him. AN ASS WHOOPING, AND AIDES.
" I couldn't believe how tight it was, like trying to fit on a glove a size too small." This kind of writing to engage the reader's active imagination is of the highest level. Looking forward to what happens in Vegas!
You have written about all my favorite subjects and now you are about to bring them all together. I will stay rock hard until I read the next chapters!
Excellent writing - Any of this from personal experience?????
Hi,
The end note is wrong...
Part four is What Mom knows Fucks Her in the Air ...
I am so wettly looking forward to the next part where Mommy gets her bum fucked.
Very fucking hot chapter! Unfortunately, I think this is the best chapter in the series as it gets somewhat strange after this.
This just keeps getting hotter and hotter. It has got me thinking of my missed opportunity with my own mother who was a class act. I remember her sitting on the sofa while I had my head resting on her thigh slowly stroking her soft inner thigh.
The story has been great up to this point, but after he order mom to submit to Ellie it goes downhill. If you are a dom/domme and have a perfect submissive you don't hand her over, it's the ones that don't want to stay your sub you do... Me personally would be seriously uncomfortable losing control that way, not to mention I would hate myself for betraying my sub.
The story is good and really hot but the english is getting worse as the story progresses. Needs a good editor.
Its all part of his master plan to eliminate Ellie as a threat I'm sure. The english Does suck but not enough to be distracting to me. Mommy is a little too willing to be a sexual submissive only. Subs I've had tend to be people pleasers. Not strong mothers, and definitely would not settle for a husband that was not afraid to be a man with her. A man in the business world is not the same thing as a man sexually. Most men forget that and wonder why the divorce rate climbs.
this one. As usual I went back and read over all the previous chapters before starting the new one. As usual, I love your stories, but somehow, I missed this one.
*** "Every female Domme like her needs a strong male Master," I answered cryptically. ***
Really!!! That is a line that I would expect some guy sitting in a corner somewhere jacking off to write!! In my 30 plus years as a Leatherman, I have met hundreds of Dommes that identify as Mistress and many of them identify as Master (yes there are female Masters). That one line turned my off to what was up until that point a wonderful story. I find it extremely insulting to those Leatherwomen.
Although I agree with you whole heartedly and many of my other stories go against that line... I thought it made sense in the context of this story.
Jasmine
I LOVE THIS STORY BUT BECAUSE CURTIS IS SOMEWHAT OF A DUMB ASS AT 18, I FIND IT HARD TO SWALLOW HE'S SMART ENOUGH TO FIGURE OUT A WAY TO DOMINATE ELLE AND SOMEHOW RELEASE ELLE'S HOLD ON HIS MOTHER. I WAS IN FEAR FOR HIS MOTHER AT HIS INSISTENCE AND WANTED TO CHOKE HIM TILL HE PASSED OUT, lol.
Out F-ing standing. I realize that this is a old story for you, but it is new to me. Love the the Weather girl fantasy realized. The light jealousy between the ladies and the guy coming into his own.... Very cool
(3/5/2022) I'd forgotten that this story was not only sexy but funny too. I wish I could give it another 5-star rating.
I hate sneaky people and Curtis is playing with fire. I would love it if Mom told Curtis that he finally got his wish for her to play with Ellie, now he wasn't to touch his mother again ever.
I enjoy women who know what they want and are willing to sacrific everything to get what they want. Mother knew she wanted a familty, to wit: children. She gives up her natural sexual life (submissive) to have Curtis. For 20 years she sacrifices. Finally, her submissive side comes out with her son but never her husband. Curtis realizes the sacrifices hius mother has made for him. However, because of his immaturity, by setting up his mother for her former Fomme (Ellie) he risks loosing her without knowing it. If he truly cares about his mother's well being a nd realizes he may lose her, he is mature beyond his years. If not, after what his mother just old him, he is stupid because he may lose her forever. 5 star series.
Only issue is your fucking up the stories by having the mom go back to Ellie you don't fully understand how the master and slave deal works the mom can't still be a slave to the son and a slave to Ellie I know how it ends the son never fully dominates Ellie it's simple you brought mom and son together just to split them apart though you don't actually write about it but it's clear that was the only possible ending if you would have went with it after the last installment
@foxterot7a oh there is no doubt he would lose her completely I have already read the last 1 before awhile back he tries to fully dominate Ellie but never completely did so there is only one way he could have went on with another story and that was the mom and son losing each other due to the son being immutre and well stupid
615. Read this a year ago, and it’s well worth a second read. More stars would be appropriate! Let’s go to Vegas.
I can see where he's coming from when he wants his mum to go back to Ellie because he thinks it's what she wants deep down and would make her truly happy. But as others have said, he doesn't fully understand the whole master/slave relationship and that he can never keep her as his submissive if she is also Ellie's. Even if he does successfully end up as Ellie's master, I don't see how it works; the mum would always be torn between the two. Perhaps he wants to just set her free and be with Miranda, but honestly, he seems a bit too immature for this to be plausible. I'm curious to see where this goes but I feel like it's too many plot threads thrown in just for the sake of including certain erotic ideas all in one story. Many people, myself included, prefer when there is just one or two solid themes running with a focus on two people and none of the overcomplicated relationship webs. It's easier to follow and easier to write, and ultimately more satisfying in the end, in my opinion.