All Comments on 'Fish in the River'

by aichiyu

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Nice one !

I can relate to your initial "orientation", as an asian myself. Enjoyed your story. Hope to hear more.....rgds... inwei aiching

wron01wron01almost 12 years ago
very authentic . . .

I was amazed to her your protagonist speaking in a voice that sounded like my wife, who is from northern China. It is hard for us Westerners to understand the Chinese mentality regarding sex. Thank you for this contribution.

ErotonautErotonautover 11 years ago
An afternoon vibrant with sensual possibilities

Nicely done, and with a slight air of melancholy in the closing paragraphs.

DashDotDashDotover 10 years ago
Very nice story

Now that is a nice day, skinny-dipping is always best when people are around to watch and join in.

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