All Comments on 'Now What? Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Would have been better if you avoided the 'him's 'and 'her's'.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Fun

I liked it...chuckled and got horny...so a pretty good read obviously

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