I'm lovin' it!
for a hang downer. TK U MLJ LV NV
This is the best poem by far, but I am biased. Wow! Please keep writing poetry.
I give this poem two thumbs up!!!
enjoyed it very much looking forward to reading more by you
Liked it-this would be a great spoken word open mic. Get the blood pumping with the right music.
You abilities never cease! Keep it up, Kal! Keep it up because I LOVE to keep on reading your stuff!!! WOW!
boring! same ol same ol Lit crap and all those anon raises? Just how many computers do you have access to because less than mediocre poetry like this rarely ever receives an H. so pat yerself on the back and keep voting your crap up but you will always know you were the one that gave yourself the H. blah
What are you so pissed at that you would make an accusation like that?
This poem gives hope to all who still wait.
This is so lovely and full of promise.
This poem is so reminiscent of a story I wrote a long time ago (not posted) that I recently got a request to write a sequel to. Your poem gave me some inspiration on some directions to take the next chapter of my story. Love your writing. :)
That's all I could say is beautiful!
Who knew I'd like a poem? This is the first time that I loved a poem enough to make it a "favorite".
I don't usually read poems, but the title, "Breathe", made me curious.
I am amazed that just a few words can make me feel like I've read a long romantic story.
This is the best thing I have read in a long time.
I know just how she feels. This poem speaks to me, personally, about what might have been for me. Sadly, for me, there will not be another chance for a happy ending.
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