All Comments  for

Breathe

bykalamazoo707©
All
Comments (17)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Like McDonald's...

I'm lovin' it!

*****

QMS

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by tazz31704/15/12

A HANG UP REVISITED

for a hang downer. TK U MLJ LV NV

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Iread2relax04/15/12

Whoa!

This is the best poem by far, but I am biased. Wow! Please keep writing poetry.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous04/15/12

I give this poem two thumbs up!!!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by donalde04/15/12

interesting

enjoyed it very much looking forward to reading more by you

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous04/16/12

This was cool as hell!!!

Liked it-this would be a great spoken word open mic. Get the blood pumping with the right music.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous04/16/12

And now, POETRY?!?

You abilities never cease! Keep it up, Kal! Keep it up because I LOVE to keep on reading your stuff!!! WOW!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous04/17/12

whoa hell

boring! same ol same ol Lit crap and all those anon raises? Just how many computers do you have access to because less than mediocre poetry like this rarely ever receives an H. so pat yerself on the back and keep voting your crap up but you will always know you were the one that gave yourself the H. blah

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous04/17/12

whoa hell

What are you so pissed at that you would make an accusation like that?

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous04/18/12

*****

Five.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Cinner05/04/12

Hope

This poem gives hope to all who still wait.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Decadentdessert05/15/12

Oh My!!!

This is so lovely and full of promise.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by lovenlearn06/16/12

Thanks for the inspiration...

This poem is so reminiscent of a story I wrote a long time ago (not posted) that I recently got a request to write a sequel to. Your poem gave me some inspiration on some directions to take the next chapter of my story. Love your writing. :)

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Beautiful

That's all I could say is beautiful!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by mapili5008/06/12

Minimal words yet deeply moving

Who knew I'd like a poem? This is the first time that I loved a poem enough to make it a "favorite".

I don't usually read poems, but the title, "Breathe", made me curious.

I am amazed that just a few words can make me feel like I've read a long romantic story.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous09/01/12

OOOOOOOOOO WOW Please, write more poetry.

This is the best thing I have read in a long time.
I know just how she feels. This poem speaks to me, personally, about what might have been for me. Sadly, for me, there will not be another chance for a happy ending.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by MaddieKim11/15/13

Lovely

Just lovely!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Breathe  or
More submissions by kalamazoo707.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission.

Post comment as (click to select):

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel