Why am I crying? Wow, just WOW!!
I so look forward to the rest of this story.
Just wow I want Star's ring and Luma's too lol - actually all of them how gorgeous :)
"That's SACRED whore. Please at least try to get the right terminology."
"It's not the terminology I'm interested in.
"Oh please. You're sitting there with three gorgeous naked men ready to satisfy your every need and you call ME a whore."
"Bitch.""Ah now, that's better." lmao this was funny but overall the chapter was so sweet i loved it!!!
ok i just started reading this thanks to finding your name on a loyal readers page. i have to comment on this chapter cuz its my fav so far. i love the commentary between luma and his love had me in stiches
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