All Comments on 'My Gym Partner Ch. 01'

Don't you????

We all get tempted... Some give in some do not.. If you deny having erotic thoughts you're only kidding yourself.. Temptation can be powerful, I for one don't mind if my wife gives in... As long as she tells me all the juicy details.. Well written, can wait for ch 2

but I do like the storyline though, so please continue. Thanks.

I am amused by, and a bit sorry for, those who bother to assinate the morals of a fictional character.

Ignore the first two commentators. The story is both erotic and realistic, and your writing style has me wanting to know more. Congratulations.

Your other stories were well written. Was this an experiment in style?

Just another cheating slut wife story, it's interesting how some people find cheating erotic. The wife in this story is just another cheating wife that obviously cares nothing for her husband, how sad that the writer thinks this is erotic.

She doesn't deserve her husbands love.

You made a big pile letters and punctuation marks. So?

I believe my it was my 7th grade English teacher that said "The difference between a writer and a great author is the writer writes, the goes somewhere and you really want to go there too." Here the only reason people will be following is out of morbid curiosity as to how badly this story can be strung together.

The excitement here makes putting some Lamisil on my feet fell exhilarating.

Otherwise your periods nice and round and the commas have almost a ridged stance.

One of the best stories i've ever heard

This didn't make a.lot of sense, not really much of a story.