All Comments on 'You Never Even Wrote Ch. 04'

gave u a 5 - but would like to have seen more of first girl - you made the hero out to be an asshole for using her - maybe next time you can give him a little more in the way of compassion if there are two women.

and I see where your coming from, cant reveal too much, but I promise we haven't seen the last of Kristie.

need a better proof reader.--Lee! Over looked the mistakes and enjoyed the story.