All Comments on 'Not Weird Ch. 02'

I love these characters I'm glad you are continuing the story I was worried it would be one of those left for 6 years lol

Hey there! I really like your storyline so far...but sometimes it was weird how fast you switched between the points of view. I have to say it all developed very fast, too. If I understood right, I just read the happenings of several weeks in like four lines...

Still I'm a fan :D So please please go on and write the next part soon x)

Now you have to hurry and post about the party. Would be nice if it didn't end in drunken tears, tho - surprise us. :0)

Good job of building up tension...hope you make it explode in a big way. I know most get on writers for bigger chapters. Shorter ones are ok if you put them out a bit more often. But if you go shorter, try to move the story forward far enough that it doesn't feel like the story hasn't moved anywhere. I make this comment to keep in mind in the future and not in referene to this chapter. I know you have to go with a natural stop in the storyline too and thiis chapter ended in a good place. The party and their finally having to deal with each other deserves its own chapter. Just in the future if you do stick with chapters this length, try to move it forward enough to satisfy the reader so there is no mutiny :)

I like that Ryan is okay with the thought of his friend and bro getting together. I'd have liked to hear his thoughts on it and when he noticed there was something there? Why is he cool with it? He clearly wasn't surprised when he saw them on New Years so he had to have known before then.

Keep writing.

I'm glad to see you posted ch.02, I'm enjoing the story :-)

iam absoloutly not an one page fan ,its a good story but i hate it when its sooo short that it takes only 5 minutes maybe 8 minutes to read the whole chapter please make it a little longer and it will be awesome

please don't take too long to post the next chapter, it's becoming excruciating all this waiting, i can tell it's going to be good though

I'm really enjoying the story and hope it doesn't take an extremely long time for more! Not being a writer I don't know what the thought process that goes into it but I really enjoy your story. I'd love to see how it progresses. Keep up the good work!

Oh please don't tell me this is it. It is right at the good paart! You are a great writer and this story needs to be told. Hope you will be adding chapters soon!

How long til part 3? This is a great read.

Am sooooo looking foward to where this story is heading its just cruel that you haven't posted chapter 3 yet.

can we just make a new rule that you can't write a multi-chapter story if you're not going to finish it? BECAUSE I WAS LOVING THIS STORY! i'm going to go sad-cry now.

Please write the next chapter. How many more years you need? This is my first ever comment even though I've been reading literotica for 5 years. Feel honoured..😀

Hey, author here. I found myself suddenly inspired to revisit this story recently, so I just wanted to give anybody who might still care a heads up that I will be deleting the first two chapters soon and replacing them with a single edited and expanded first chapter and continuing the story from there. Now that I'm out of school I may actually have the time and energy to finish, but I make no guarantees! xx singthegreys

Hope you will update more soon.

Bruh, I have been waiting YEARS for you to update this story, that's how much I like it. You gonna?

What happens at the party?!?! I wanna know the ending!! Why leave us hanging? !?!

Love the story. Please upload a ch 3 and continue the series.