All Comments on 'Heartless'

run deep within ones course. TK U MLJ LV NV

I've ever written, and I'm sooo excited it was accepted on Literotica...Yayyy!!!

Please vote and/or comment, I'm curious as to what you think...thank you.

Robbin

xoxo

Sugar I don't know poetry but I like your style and effort!

Hope you expand your writing to story's and maybe even audios!

Your blog site videos are just wonderful and I am in deep lust for you!

Hope your Lit stay is very pleasurable for you!

Nice poem,wonderful resume,fair warning to your lover and I think you made my heart hurt a little,yet intrested me to want to see if I could be the one worthy of your attentions and man enough to care for your heart.

Hi Robbin!

I'm thrilled to see you in here. I loved this poem, and I hope you'll keep writing. You have such a beautiful heart, and your life experiences will provide you with all the poetry subject matter--emotion, pain, love, passion, life experience--that any writer could ever wish for.

You and I are personal friends (although you may not recognize my Lit. member name), and I would love to see you write up some of your life experiences for the site. Call them fiction; no one would ever believe that they are, in fact, true (but I know! ;-).

All the best, wonderful Robbin!

Snow Snake

Thank you everyone for your kind comments and votes!

Since this is the first poem I've ever written, I'm amazed and honored at your incredible feedback and support. You've truly inspired me to follow my dream of becoming an author.

Robbin

xoxo

Wow that was a powerful piece Robbin!! You have a gift and you should write more!!! Well done xx

Alan.

I enjoyed reading it and I can relate. Lost love is difficult to replace.