All Comments on 'The Stranger'

by Gale82

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Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 12 years ago
A finely-wrought tale

Exquisite. Thank you.

ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosalmost 12 years ago
Very nice, but one nit-pick.

"wreaked havoc", not "wreathed havoc".

YgraineYgrainealmost 12 years ago
Beautifully written

A very sweet story which, with a few tweaks to tighten up the ending and catch all the tiny errors could easily be sold to a women's magazine. Good luck with your writing.

Gale82Gale82almost 12 years agoAuthor
Me Bad!

Thanks for the kind comments. I know there were a few errors and I do apologise - the story was one I wrote in a single sitting, without pause for thought. It almost wrote itself, really. I ought to have corrected it more thoroughly.

OtazelOtazelalmost 12 years ago
Very very good.

I don't fill up to many stories - but I did to this one.

BTTapBTTapalmost 12 years ago
Cool

Very cool. I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you for sharing.

AbsalomrideAbsalomridealmost 12 years ago
Very nice though maybe a little too familiar or obvious.

Pleasant flowing and intelligent writing. Thanks.

bruce22bruce22over 11 years ago
Beautifully put together.

Nice ideas and even better words. We really feel for Emma even though very little information was given to us. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Thank you

This story hit me on so many levels. Emma reminded me of my late sister; similar tragic happenstance, but there was no angel-of-the-night to save her when she swallowed the pills. I guess the miracle was that her baby survived, and as his uncle, I look to the day that he'll grow up and do his late mother proud. Again, thank you for writing this and posting, in a way you brought my sister's memory to life.

ythebadgerythebadgerover 11 years ago
Absolutely beautiful

Nothing else needs to be said.

chytownchytownover 11 years ago
Great Story!!!!

Thanks for sharing. Wow Thanks again!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Deserves a better score

Gale82 is a much better writer than her scores would indicate. Nice O Henry plot twist at the end but we could see it coming. Well done and I hope to read more from you.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
Nice Tale

I still hate cheaters, though

R.I.P.

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