All Comments on 'Finally Ch. 02'

OMG, I was amazed at this one. I read the first chapter and was waiting for this so eagerly. Amazing story. I want her to meet Steve finally now. And they can finally do it. Awesome job!

....really enjoyed that, thanks :)

its too late for her. TK U MLJ LV NV

Again, very well done. I love how you are not repetative in your descriptions...I know where I want this to go...but it's a twist...probably wishful thinking...I eagerly await the next step/page. Brilliant writing.