All Comments on 'Caught in Bed by My Wife's Sister'

You're an asshole.

Reasonably well-written, but I can't quite see the point. The guy is terrible and totally unsympathetic.

A story where the cheating husband actually takes the time to write about the "other" woman's feelings is truly unique. I'd love to hear about the few other times you've almost gotten caught. Go for it, Zonner: you're a natural!

...past you phoning your mistress while your wife is recovering from childbirth.

That you would do such a thing is despicable.

That you would write a story about it and tell your reader that it is true is unfathomable.

If you post any more of your exploits, make them ones where you aren't a worthless jerk (if you have any)

Anything that starts with a disclaimer of "I am not a writer" is unlikely to go well but this is just awful. Not only does it make me fairly certain that you're a sociopath, it's horribly written and not at all descriptive. Your mixed tenses are just annoying. Try changing it so that Mary brutally murders you in bed, throws your body into River Kent, and moves in to help raise your fatherless newborn, then move it to the Erotic Horror section. Conclude with a heartwarming scene of Aunt and child taking a peaceful nap together because Mary sleeps just fine.

From the first sentence all I thought was "WHAT A BASTARD". The wife just gives birth and he picks up his mistress and then proceeds to fucks said mistress in his wife's bed while she is wearing his wife's underwear. They are caught by the wife's sister who doesn't even tell the wife? Hells to the no! I catch my sister's husband being a bastard and I would drive her to the divorce lawyer myself!

You truly are an asshole and I hope your wife found out and divorced your cheating ass.

What an ego.....Mary should have told her as she would be well rid of you

'nuff said

If this is the best you can do fuck off somewhere and don't come here again you are a fuck wit

Let me say your excerpt expressed your infidelity perfectly. I am sure there are some people that find cheating acceptable and it appears that you felt this was the forum to unburden yourself of guilt........wrong. There are those times personal infidelity should always be kept to ourselves this would've been that time.

Your wife was having your child and you brought some bottom feeder back to your home and dick her down in your marital bed, it bears repeating while your wife lay recuperating after giving birth to your child. What really disturbing you had been stepping out on her for years! You know some women think having a child will resolve fidelity issues, when all it truly does is compounds a horrible mess. It's apparent your wife lives in a insulate bubble and choose not to see you for what you truly are........scum. It's also apparent she suffer from some sort of in securities and being the hero that you are you feed off it. If your infidelity have been going on for years she knows and chooses to turn a blind eye to this........couldn't be me. Therefore she won't leave you on her own accord and this is where family should step up with an intervention and show the fuck out.

Let me tell you how this fowl shit would have went down if this was my sister's house. Imagine if you will you were caught by myself or any family member gathering particularly for this joyous event. We would allowed you to get that last nut off while we are preparing to make this a memorable event for all. You and your bitch would have been greeted by pot of hot cooking oil thrown right in your faces. Then me and whoever traveled to be apart of this event would take pleasure in beating you and the bitch as you writhe in pain from the oil burns. Keep in mind just because your wife loves or thinks she loves your trifling ass her family loves her, hence the visit to welcome the baby. At some point she will have her fill of your craziness then her fury will be released on you and your bitch. By all means come back by and share the exploits of that beat down. Oh wait, you being such a punk she possibly needs to purchase a gun and lay and wait an ambush your ass but good. This form of therapy offering great closure for all the years of emotional abuse you subjected her to..

But there isn't one good thing said about this piece of shit "writing" or its fucked up author. I suspect that the whole damn thing is fiction, but it isn't even interesting fiction. If there is any truth to it, castration would be an appropriate response to despicable behavior like that.

On top of it all, there wasn't even anything erotic in the writing. Just pull this thing off the board, slink back into your hole and go away.

to end up with a soulless scumbag excuse of a father. I also feel sorry for Mary to have witnessed such a horrific scene. The sight of you bare assed naked and grunting like a pig in a slop trough (which is what your bitch's pussy is... a slop trough) is enough to make any woman throw up spleen.

Goodbye asshole.

This will hopefully, and mercifully, be your last attempt at doing something for which you have absolutely no talent at all!

I renew my request that Literotica allow a "0" vote, allowing for appropriate recognition of writers with your level of talent.

dicked the sister too.

this is just bad fiction.

he gave it away at the end

when he gets emily and mary

mixed up,the scumbag.

I love it - it's so very, very naughty. zonner, don't worry too much about the negative comments. If this were about a woman cheating on a man and making him eat the cum out of her pussy, everyone would be jerking off on their LCD. Please keep writing for others who have the same type of fetish.

Cheating men are horrible and you seriously need to stop and if you actually read this shit-yes shit-then you need to get a fucking life or at least stop jerking off to some guy breaking the law and making women throw up. You are vile sick ugly mean tool and a sick mother-fucking bastard. Asshole.

Btw: your story was pretty terrible. It didnt make any sense and you have no talent at all!

Ps. I can pratically garuntee that you wife knows.

WTF are with these comments? Its erotic fiction people. Its a F'n story. There is no wife, no sister and no kid. Its just a story. I've read far worse. Plenty of things that are considered despicable in real life can be erotic in text. I'd never expect these sorts of responses on THIS site!

Bit of a sick fucker aren't you! Your wife's just had a baby and all you can think of is shagging someone else, Hope your wife's sister tells her and she leaves you.

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Might've been better if you hadn't shared it's true. You are a horrible person.

SO sexy , I loved it I bet the sister wanted to join you