All Comments on 'Offspring Ch. 003'

by Talemaster

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debbie2freedebbie2freealmost 12 years ago
Too short

You gotta make each chapter a touch longer sweetie

TalemasterTalemasteralmost 12 years agoAuthor
Fair comment Debbie

I decided originally to publish three chapters at a time, not knowing only one per day would get uploaded. A bit late to change it now since there are several chapters already in the queue. Hope it does not irritate too much. Thanks for the comment.

Dry_opinionDry_opinionalmost 12 years ago
Mindblowing

The fantasy is becoming even more fantastic. Great job!

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