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What a hot and charming story. However, I would have left out this sentence: Now here is where the store gets a little unbelievable, according to my friends; but I swear that this is the way it happened.

Your friends weren't there to witness, plus, I think we all come to expect "unbelievable" in erotica.

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You're right: Unbelievable. On the other hand, perhaps believable. Perhaps that is why the guys from Ann Arbor drove to Toledo.

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You made it sound real!